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Thursday, January 17, 2013

Friday's Fractured Features...

Today for your fractured features, I've decided that its about time I give you another teaser from my current WIP (Work in Progress) Just Another Player:

... While sitting there, uneasily looking around, the hair at the nape of her neck stood on end; she could feel eyes were watching her.

Malicious

Dark

Ugly fear coursed down her spine.

Suzanna jerked her head around, in time to see a man duck behind a pillar.

Heart racing, perspiration beading up under her nose and at her spine, Suzanna sat with her purse and packages held tightly to her chest, ready to leap up and run.

Thump, thump; her heart pounded in her chest.

Terrified now, Suzanna sat looking toward the pillar where having last seen the man duck. Feeling something brush against her arm, Suzanna jumped up and knocked into a woman trying to get passed her.

“Oh, I’m so sorry. I didn’t see you.” Suzanna apologized.

“Obviously not; you have your chair sticking clear in the isle; no one can get past you.” The woman said while pushing past Suzanna and muttering: “These young people think they own the blasted mall...” The woman went off shaking her head and mumbling her egocentric chatter.
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I hope you've enjoyed the sample of my story. Have a great day!
~Joyce P.

1 comment:

  1. Vert intriguing. Makes me want to know what's going on.

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